1.7.11

Boy. I, I, I

Inside, a boy I found. The universe
and a thousand stars painted
on his cheeks. Inside his eyes
a dark sky, unquenchable.

Inside a boy. I found the universe
and a thousand stars. Painted
on his cheeks, inside his eyes,
a dark sky. Unquenchable.

Inside a boy I found the universe,
a thousand stars painted.
On his cheeks inside. His eyes
a dark sky unquenchable.
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2 comments:

  1. Marie1.7.11

    Rudi, this may be my favorite one by you. I really love it. It is so interesting how punctuation can totally change meaning. Very nice.

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  2. ruedigar1.7.11

    Thanks! I enjoyed writing this one. Punctation is amazing!

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